Little Miss Vixen ([info]amidalashari) wrote,
@ 2008-03-21 14:55:00
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Entry tags:the west wing, ww: donna, ww: josh, ww: josh/donna

Speaking In Tongues
Title: Speaking In Tongues
Fandom: The West Wing
Pairing(s): Josh/Donna
Word Count: 145
Rating: R

Summary: They've invented a whole new language.

Notes: Spoilers up to episode 4:3 - College Kids.


They've invented a whole new language, the two of them; words that say everything but what they really mean, a touch on the arm, a head tilt, a smile -

It isn't the smallest language in the world, but it's close.

-

"I need a memo," he says, and ducks his head -

(You look good.)

"All right, but I need you back in the office by nine."

(I don't want you seeing other people.)

"You should ask Joey out," she says, and smiles -

(You should date me instead.)

-

Or -

"Hey."

(His mouth on hers, the small of her back jammed against the kitchen counter,)

"How are you doing?"

(his hands firm on her waist. Later, his grip on her arms as she arches up to meet him -)

"Good."

(We can't do this again.)

Later, his hands in his pockets, dimples -

(One day ...)

-

English isn't her first language.




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[info]jenn12597
2008-03-22 01:51 pm UTC (link)
Love it...

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[info]amidalashari
2008-03-22 01:56 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]justdreaming88
2008-03-23 02:22 am UTC (link)
Perfectly them.

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[info]amidalashari
2008-03-23 04:04 am UTC (link)
Thanks! :)

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[info]flippet
2008-03-23 05:51 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, I like this one. Perfect final line. :-)

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[info]amidalashari
2008-03-24 03:58 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]flippet
2008-03-29 05:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh, hey...I was just thinking about this fic again, and how I really like it. It reminds me of something...I think I read another J/D fic, sometime last year, that also put alternate thoughts in parentheses. Do you happen to know it? I'd really like to read it again.

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[info]amidalashari
2008-03-30 04:40 am UTC (link)
Hmmm ... it's not ringing any bells, sorry :(

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